first snowbird The air grew brisk and flecks of snow and hail dropped down on us, the gold receded from the harvested wheat as well as the horizon, trees swooned to cover their sudden nakedness, clouds tumbled over themselves in haste -- the skies streamed out to the color of a night that wouldn’t end ‘til spring, and then rains began as if our own tears were shed, our own salt sacrificed for another. In the neighboring county, someone said he saw you by the river’s wide edge, willing it to shrink, killing fish with your heavy-lidded eyes, raging, your back turned to us, waiting for her return.
you can probably guess that it's cold outside, that winter has reached Georgia -
and who better to ring that in than a little re-telling of demeter and her
daughter persephone.....
Love the poem you multi-talented girl, you! And love the idea of NaPoWriMo. I’ll look forward to your poems every day!
I’ve loved your daily art project and look forward to reading your daily poetry. Judging from your first poem, I’m going to enjoy this month.