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  • in reply to: Salon Insights 1.31.14 #16118

    thais
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    Thank you! Interesting about using 2nd person.

    in reply to: Devi Salon piece week 1 #16067

    thais
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    Dear Devi,

    Loved this action packed scene. My favorite part was when Crash and Dia kissed in the middle of moving traffic! Fabulous! I’ve attached my comments.

    in reply to: Sabina Week 1 #16045

    thais
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    Hi Sabina,

    I loved experiencing a new country through the eyes of a child. So many vivid details about the house and the extended family living it. I’m attaching a Word file with some more comments.

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