Sabina Week 4

[Sabina]

Hello All,

 

I apologize for the late submission.  It has been a tough week for me.  🙂

 

Thank you all so much for your feedback and help.  I really appreciate your comments and guidance.

Warmly,

 

Sabina

Discussion

[thais]

Dear Sabina,

Such a big moment this week. I was really there with you and felt in scene the whole time. Lovely.

Thais

[Devi S. Laskar]

hi,
just wanted to say that this was a very moving piece. thanks so much for sharing it.

[Elizabeth]

Sabina,

 

 

This is an amazing and powerful and courageous scene. You really made me cry. And you created such a vivid picture. And wove wisdom and emotion in. I understand why the moment of his death is given in summary, but everything else here is so specific and powerful, each detail carries to much weight and meaning, that you might try to give that moment some of this power.

 

 

It’s so important to write about the things that happen to lots of people but that no one talks about. This is the power and importance of books in our lives, isn’t it? And even for people who haven’t experienced the specific tragedy, the emotions are powerfully resonant. Bravo on the courage it took to create such a moving piece.

 

 

Warmly,

 

Elizabeth

 

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