Devi Salon piece week 4

[Devi S. Laskar]

hello all,
here is my piece for week 4, it is a continuation of week 3 scene.

Discussion

[thais]

Dear Devi,

I’m just so intrigued by Crash and Dia. I love this story and look forward to reading all these little bits every time. I can’t wait to see this put all together in a book. It’s really very touching and complex.

Thais

[Sabina]

Devi,

I love your writing.  And I love the vivid scenes.  I wish I had the whole story in front of me to read.

 

Thank you for sharing 🙂

 

Sabina

[Elizabeth]

Devi,

 

 

I am dying to know what is going on here. I am thrust into the middle of action, but I can tell the stakes are high and a lot is going on. I love the setting and the great details throughout, and the surprise turns and intrigue.

 

 

You’ll see that I edited a bunch of mediation out of that final scene/ image. We know we’re in Dia’s POV, and the action is strong.

 

 

Fabulous scene!

Warmly,

 

Elizabeth

 

[Author]

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