K. on Broadway She was the kind of girl who gathered like a storm, gaining momentum in every moment as she churned by the water’s edge, toes curling in the foam, her complexion perfect as the sun hid behind the bank of clouds, waiting for the next big event to present itself, give her another chance to expose her strengths and hide her weaknesses and give the world another show – better than the previous night’s extravaganza, her smile dazzling and deadly, through her diamond tears.
today's question: what if you described a hurricane like a girl?
this brings Antigone to mind for me (forgive me, just finished reading it for the millionth time with my tenth graders)…
i love the strength of the d’s in the final two lines (i felt the bite of driving rain in a gale) and the image of her toes curling in the foam…beautiful