day 21 of MyNaPoWriMo 2011 (write a poem a day)

“Precisionist”

She learned the geometry first 
from painting skyscrapers, mathematics 

clean and focused like a camera lens --  hers 
was a world void of condition, social 

or human, and soon danced the abstractions
in front of her unblinking eye.

Each winter, a pilgrim to New 
Mexico, she yearned to see the forest 

inside the desert of bleached bone trees; 
eighty years ago, she stared at the mountain 

outside her window and found
the lioness, one eye open toward 

the people inching closer 
but herself a body, at rest.
I ran across two paintings of Georgia O'Keeffe"s: The Mountain, New
Mexico (1931) and Cow's Skull, with Calico Roses (1931) --
and read up about her. She was dubbed the "precisionist" which is
where the title comes from; Luckily she fits in to the "girl" theme this
month :)


		
		
			

2 thoughts on “day 21 of MyNaPoWriMo 2011 (write a poem a day)”

  1. yes, i knew it was her…what a wonderful poem, Devi. I love the totality of the world of her vision, the multiple ways to read “danced” in

    . . . hers
    was a world void of condition, social

    or human, and soon danced the abstractions
    in front of her unblinking eye.

    who or what is the lioness, I wonder? gay girl in me wants to read it “queer,” but I’m sure that’s not the reference 🙂

  2. 🙂
    the lioness — well, i looked at the painting of “the mountain, new mexico” and it looked like a lioness face; but really she’s looking at the mountain and seeing herself

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