Day 9 of MyNaPoWriMo (write a poem a day for a month!)

Nov 9, 2011 | Magazine Vol. 1

Kore

Sometimes I can distract him with a game 
of dice, chances are he’ll win no matter 

what, he is the king of the dead after all – 
and he cheats well. But he loves a good game 

and I can slip away to see her, if only 
for a moment, from a distance. You see me too,

but you don’t know -- it’s hard to focus 
when the grasses are but long hairs; the sky 

and road are both the color of charcoal. 
I’m in the hothouses on Canal and Seventh, 

just off the main drag; you see me, don’t you? 
I’m the one breathing life into those platoons 

of orchids, pink and white, defying my mother, 
shining them through winter in ancient holy light.
I have a black thumb. There, I said it. But thanks to some ingenuity from a friend,
I've been able to cheat death, and keep alive the hibiscus plant that was given to me
 when my oldest was born thirteen years ago. The hibiscuses were yellow at one time
and then during a drought, the plant died. My friend came by, and moved the plant
 so that it stood next to the air-conditioning vent in the summer and the heating
release in the winter.
"Just leave it alone" he said. And I did.
The next year, the plant flowered a little late
but the petals were white and they've been white ever since -- flowering faithfully
and staying alive. It is winter here, in Georgia, and the plant is now as tall
as a professional basketball player with a sumo wrestler's girth. It's not barren
yet (i've turned on the heat.....) though the last of its flowers for this season
are already on the ground. I'm waiting for spring....

3 Comments

  1. James Black

    Love this: “he is the king of the dead after all – / and he cheats well.”

    🙂

  2. Jen Dracos-Tice

    i love the sound/internal rhyme in the final couplet, the image of the grasses as “but long hairs,” and the stanzas about the hothouses…not quite sure what to make of the drag/hothouse flowers/Canal Street references in these last few stanzas, but i’m going to go look them up. i keep thinking about drag and different personas and “tricking” perception/death/life…but I am probably reading in too much. never knew that Persephone is also known as Kore

    • Devi Laskar

      you got it right 🙂
      i’m told from my gardner friend that orchids can change and adapt, that they’re not as fragile
      as they look so i was going for the trick of perception

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