5 Things We Avoid That We’d Do Better To Embrace & 3 Things We’d Do Better to Avoid: by Elizabeth Stark
Five Things We Avoid That We’d Do Better To Embrace 1) Verbs: Make things happen in your sentences. Be alert for “There is/ are/ were” and “I felt/ heard/ saw/ noticed.” These usually can be cut and replaced with verbs, further into the heart of the sentence, that pack a much greater punch. Example: She […]









